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  korea's soccer
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Korea's soccer gets stronger day by day.
Park ji sung is the first of this change.
everyone knows that changing has been started after 2002 world cup. After 2002 world cup, park ji sung went to psv thanks to guus hiddink.
Park ji sung adjusted well and finally went to the best football club, Manchester united f.c.
So park ji sung became the captain of korea national soccer team.
In the mean time, other korean players are went to big league team.
Ki sung yong and cha du ri went to Celtic the best team in scotland, lee chung yong went to bolton in england premier league.
Another players went to foreign soccer team, and they also palyed well.
finally, we could go second round in 2010 world cup.
In 2002 world cup, i think korea could go semi final not our pure ability but so many merit home team could be given.
But 2010 world cup, it is important that korea went second round only our ability.
Nowadays, existing players keep going well, moreover new players in foreign league are getting increase.
In germany, gu ja chul, ji dong won and son heung min
do very well in each team, and son heung min is being called by
many famous big league team.
And also in spain, lee seung jun and beak seung ho are in u-16 f.c. barcelona. they do well and grow so fast.
eventually, korea will have many players in various league,
then korea will be the best in asia, and further, the best in the world.
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 2013-03-08 오후 6:12:39
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Mina Korea's soccer gets stronger day by day.
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Park ji sung is the first of this changing.
Correct
>> Park Ji Sung is the first one that brings this change.

everyone knows that changing has been started after 2002 world cup.
Correct
>> Everyone knows that change started after the 2002 World Cup.

After 2002 world cup, park ji sung went to psv thanks to guus hiddink.
Correct
>> After the 2002 World Cup, Park Ji Sung went to psv thanks to guus hiddink.

Park ji sung adjusted well and finally went to the best football club, Manchester united f.c.
Correct




So park ji sung became the captain of korea national soccer team.
Correct
>> So Park Ji Sung became the captain of Korea’s national soccer team.

In the mean time, other korean players are went to big league team.
Correct
>> In the meantime, other Korean players go to the big league team.

Ki sung yong and cha du ri went to Celtic the best team in scotland, lee chung yong went to bolton in england premier league.
Correct
>>Ki Sung Yong and Cha Du Ri go to Celtic, the best team in Scotland. Lee Chung Yong go to Bolton in England premier league.

Another players went to foreign soccer team, and they also palyed well.
Correct
>> Other players go to foreign soccer team and they also played well.


finally, we could go second round in 2010 world cup.
Correct
>> Finally, we reach second round in 2010 World Cup.


In 2002 world cup, i think korea could go semi final not our pure ability but so many merit home team could be given.
Correct
>> In 2002 World Cup, I think Korea goes to semi-finals not because of our ability but because of home town advantage.

But 2010 world cup, it is important that korea went second round only our ability.
Correct
>> But in 2010 World Cup, it is important that Korea goes to second round with our ability.

Nowadays, existing players keep going well, moerover new players in foreign are getting increase.
Correct
>> Nowadays, existing players keep doing well, moreover new players in foreign teams are increasing.


In germany, gu ja chul, ji dong won and son heung min do very well in each team.
Correct
>> In Germany, Gu Ja Chul, Ji Dong Won and Song Heung Min are doing well in each teams.

And also in spain, lee seung jun and beak seung ho in u-16 barcelona play very well, grow very fast.
Correct
>> And also in Spain, Lee Seung Jun and Beak Seung ho in u-16 Barcelona are playing very well.

eventually, korea will have many players in foreign league, age from teenage to nearly thirty, which can korea is the best in asia, and further in the world.
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>> Eventually, Korea will have many players in the foreign league, which ages from teenagers to nearly thirties which will make Korea the best in Asia and the whole world.
2013-03-11
오전 11:25:17